This is my attempt at telling the story of Serenthia’s founding without a mythical prologue and time skip. Let me know how effective you think it is.
Sunbird
This is my attempt at telling the story of Serenthia’s founding without a mythical prologue and time skip. Let me know how effective you think it is.
It is probably a bit early to say after two sentences, but from those I would say you should make sure to have some panels where the play is the only thing going on. On this page, at least, it’s much to easy to take it as just unimportant background noise to Vask and Salva’s conversation (I only went back and read the first sentence after kind of accidentally catching the second)
Pensions aren’t always an option.
Vask still cares.